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Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Show Not Tell - Table Tennis

I was so nervous because this was my first time playing the game. I didn't know what to do so I asked one of my team members for help on how to play. “Whack” went the ball as it hit the table and was zooming towards me like a flying egg. I quickly rushed to the side and smashed the ball back to her. I finished, victorious.
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5 comments:

  1. SerenaMarch 22, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    Hi Aliza
    it me Serena what a cool
    story you have keep up the
    great work

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  2. CeciliaApril 27, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    Hey Aliza,

    I really like how you wrote your story. Good on you for using amazing vocabulary. Keep up the great work!

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  3. Serena KApril 27, 2012 at 10:59 AM

    Nice work you have Aliza
    keep up the great work.

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  4. SelinaMay 21, 2012 at 9:16 AM

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  5. SelinaMay 21, 2012 at 9:18 AM

    Hello Aliza ,
    WOW that is a very awesome post of yours. You have put some interesting vocab into your story! keep up the great work and I would love to read another post of yours.

    Yours Selena
    Room 22

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