Narrative writing....

As I reached Pt England beach I sprinted to the sand it was burning my feet like I was on lava. As I went to go find a space for me to lay my stuff down for our picnic that we were going have at the beach.

SPLASH as me and Mele sprinted into the water it was warm as if i was in the shower. But the only thing that was boring was Sesalina didn’t get permission from her to swim from her mum.

BANG as Mele head hit the rock as she was diving into the beach. I jumped into see if she was ok she said she was as I got her out of the beach Sesalina was lying on the hot sand as she saw me and Mele coming out of the beach she asked Mele what happened to her head I said she went and dived into the rock.

As we were setting up our picnic I “said to Mele to “hurry up, lets go get a tan while we are eating our food. Sesalina said she wanted to swim we said come then.

As we went for our last swim Sesalina came and jumped in. As it was getting dark we got out off the beach and packed up because me and Mele’s dad came to pick us up to go home.

year 8 and 7 social

Lights were flashing and the hall was full of dancing girls and boys as if a concert was happening. All my friends looked amazing they were singing the songs that were playing. The hall was shaking and the ground was rumbling and everyone was making a beat of sound. Mubba looked beautiful in her mullet skirt.

Social was awesome!! When the GANGNAM song came on everyone was going wild and they were doing a dance to that song. It was really fun and crazy so that was the best thing about the social.

Everyone screamed trying to find the best dougie dance because it was like a challenge. Mary Loseli was taking the dance floor she was the master of the dougie battle but sadly someone else had beaten her dougie style. There was a lot of challenges different Girls and Boys were winning.

Sausages were given out even drinks. The lights were colourful and the boys were dancing like a crazy horse. Some of the girls were Sitting and the others was showing off their dance move. There was a long conga line running around the hall going crazy. There were even funky style of clothes and shoes.The music was loud and the DJ was playing funny songs and cool songs.

Bush walk...

As it was a bright sunny day I went for a walk with my friend Chanel through a forested with lots of trees and bushes around. As we were waiting to meet up with our friends we were waiting because we were going to have a picnic. “ZOOM” as Tyla came sprinting to us as she saw us setting up the picnic.

As we started to see our friends come we were excited we were jumping up and down. As we were all settled down we went for a walk to look around the forests squeak squeak as the birds were talking as Tyla ‘said to us if we wanted to play a game Chanel and I replied yes Tyla. As Tyla was explaining the game to us we were listening. Tyla
said the game was tigie.

Swash Chanel and I went of running around the tree’s and bushes we were sprinting away from Tyla because she was going to tag us as we went back to where we were sitting we all went to take our jumpers off because we were sweating like we were having a shower.

As the sun was going down it was getting dark. I asked my two best friends if they wanted to go for one last walk around the forests they ‘said yes so off we went for our last walk. As it was getting dark we were starting to pack up because Tyla mum was going to pick us up from the front of the gate where you come in to the forests. As her mum came grabbed every thing and off we went home.

Blue light disco- Tamara & Aliza

As I walked in towards the breeze I had to give my ticket to Mrs Nua. That was so I could get a sausage and a drink. I then walked into the hall, it was very loud and kind of dark. As I walked in the song was very loud and everyone was glowing like stars. I was very excited when I saw everybody jumping up and down and dancing. During that night some of my other friends had turned up, there were competitions and prizes up for grabs.The first competition was limbo, the year 5s and 6s were first. Next it was the year 7s and 8s. That was the first competition, after that we got our sausage and drinks. There were lots of teachers like Mrs Nua, Mrs Squires, Mrs Tele’a and there were lots of light that was green, blue, black, yellow, purple and others. At the end of the disco my mum came and picked me and Tamara up from school to go home.

My Running Animation

This is my running stack. I've been working on this piece of task for 2weeks. It's been a hard assignment. Hope you enjoy.

Aliza Cross Country

"BANG as the clapper went the 12 year old girls set off. I was sprinting around the corner of the field trying to tell my friend beside me “Run! All the girls at the back are catching up to us!!!

EWW mud!! I was slipping and sliding all around the mud puddle on the track trying to catch up to my opponents but I was already tired. Gasping for breath I was determined to try and pass them. The track was winding through the trees towards Tamaki College. It got really narrow in places. Sometimes I even felt like I was going to fall down the bank

As I got closer to the finish line everybody was cheering for me to run . I put on a burst of speed and gasping for breath ran passed one of my opponents Chante. As I finished I felt drained of energy but I was proud of myself for coming 9th.

Don't Smoke by Aliza and Sesalina

People around the world smoke and that causes a big problem. Did you know that there are 4,000 chemicals in every single cigarette. Because of these chemical people who smoke can get sick or end up in the hospital ready for their lives to end. Smoking is a very bad idea because if you smoke for the first time then your body will want more and more because it is addictive. When the smoke gets into your body it damages everything even your heart and brain including your lungs.


More and more people buy smokes and they don’t realise they're spending more than 105 dollars every week if they smoke about a pack a day. Some people waste their money on smokes even though they have nowhere to live. Instead of buying smokes people would have a lot more money to buy shopping or things for their children.

When you smoke it can also affect your appearance. You start to have wrinkles because the smoke dries your skin. Smoking can cause a lot of problems such as it gives you stained teeth and even bad breath.

As you know teenagers around the world smoke, Why do teenagers smoke? I think they get influenced by their family or friends but I wonder why they want to start. Smoking is a bad thing and teenagers should stop smoking because it can damage your body, affect how you look and waste money. Teenagers, before you start you should think about smoking and how it affects your body. It might even make you die at a very young age.